User talk:MHSstaff/Projects/RossStuffEdits

Wow

This looks amazing. Great job! --I'm not the Ross UDWiki needs, I'm the Ross it deserves. 22:14, 23 September 2012 (BST)

Question: You write that this occurs in the summer of 2009, but most of the quotes are from April? -MHSstaff 23:49, 23 September 2012 (BST)

Which is technically spring. Fair point. --I'm not the Ross UDWiki needs, I'm the Ross it deserves. 00:00, 24 September 2012 (BST)

It was more that in the text, you had a few references to June, which is confusing (I think the mass needle revive referenced June) and did not make sense with the quote dates. Anyways, you had a couple of misspellings / wrong words and maybe some comma splices, which I made some corrections (or suggestions) here. Feel free to use (or not use) what you want. I also fleshed out the intro a little more. The entire article reads a little like "storytime with Grandpa Ross" which is pretty cool, so if you are doing more of these, you could use that idea to frame the entire series. Anyways, it's a pretty cool little article and makes a lot of sense. Awesome job. -MHSstaff 22:21, 24 September 2012 (BST)

Better that than story time with Uncle Karek, that can occasionally get crotchety. --Karek^{maps 2.0?!} 01:59, 15 October 2012 (BST)