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<center>'''This section is only for chatting only about my back story. Any issues such as continuity issues, grammar, or cheers and jeers about my writing go here. Thank you in advance.'''</center>
'''Did you find a issue with the grammar, punctuation? Wish to chat about the story? Please do so here. Cheers and jeers are welcomed as well, but please keep trolling away from here out of respect to others. Thank you in advance.'''--[[User:Matt Aries|Matt Aries]] ([[User talk:Matt Aries|talk]]) 15:31, 8 October 2015 (UTC)


== Chapter 1 mistakes ==
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"Something in is just snaps." I am guessing it should say "Something in '''us''' just snaps". "For myself, their wasn't just one instance,..." should say "For myself, '''there''' wasn't just one instance,...". "The powers that be sent him here to see if he was insane, or not." not sure what you are trying to say here...maybe clear it up? "He bit and ripped out a jugular out of a twenty year veterans from Maltons Finest." I think should say "He bit and ripped out a jugular out of a twenty year '''veteran''' from '''Malton's''' Finest." "It raises moral and..." there is an "e" at the end of morale. "I must have fallen a sleep,..." should just say "asleep"...love the story so far. It has inspired my own history story. I thought I would help perfect the story and cant wait for chapter 2.--{{User:Patrick MacManus/Sig}} 23:45, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
 
 
 
'''Ah the fabled Battle of Club Cummings. I remember shadowing the Big Bash, spending new years in the middle of Malton and then giving the RRF hell in their own backyard.<br> Good times..... Good times indeed.--'''[[User:Forgotten86|<span style="color: Lime">Forgotten86</span>]] <sup>[[MCDU|<span style="color: DARKORANGE">MCDU</span>]]:[[User talk:Forgotten86|<span style="color: DeepSkyBlue">T</span>]]</sup>''' 16:24, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
: I hope I did that justice? I know things weren't accurate, but, I had to made things more climatic, and trying to fit in everyone I could. It's a shame I can't justify giving nods to the notable zombies that were involved. Hope you enjoyed it --[[User:Matt Aries|Matt Aries]] ([[User talk:Matt Aries|talk]]) 18:21, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
 
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Latest revision as of 12:35, 19 October 2015

Behind the Eyes of Madness: The Matt Aries Story
Matt Aries Urban Dead Wiki Page

Prologue * Chapter 1 * Chapter 2 * Chapter 3 * Chapter 4 * Chapter 5 * Chapter 6

Story Chat



Did you find a issue with the grammar, punctuation? Wish to chat about the story? Please do so here. Cheers and jeers are welcomed as well, but please keep trolling away from here out of respect to others. Thank you in advance.--Matt Aries (talk) 15:31, 8 October 2015 (UTC)



Ah the fabled Battle of Club Cummings. I remember shadowing the Big Bash, spending new years in the middle of Malton and then giving the RRF hell in their own backyard.
Good times..... Good times indeed.--Forgotten86 MCDU:T 16:24, 14 October 2015 (UTC)

I hope I did that justice? I know things weren't accurate, but, I had to made things more climatic, and trying to fit in everyone I could. It's a shame I can't justify giving nods to the notable zombies that were involved. Hope you enjoyed it --Matt Aries (talk) 18:21, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
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