User:Revenant/Corrections to Grim's guide

This page contains corrections to Grim s' superb Grims guide to staying alive, and has no real value to anyone beyond Grim and myself.

Revenant's Nit-picking/Corrections

Now, I know from talking to you that "i", "im", "Grims", etc. are your style, so I've refrained from pointing those out, and some of these are just minor nit-picky things which you're free to ignore. (Well, you're obviously free to ignore anything you want... ;))

I hope that most of these are helpful to you, however. I want to point out that I still think an edit or diff would've been faster and more wiki-like (and easier!), but yeah: your page, your rules, etc...

Finally, I've used Commonwealth spellings wherever I can, because we need to fight the power! ;)

Cheers! ᚱᛁᚹᛖᚾᚨᚾᛏ 17:00, 18 September 2007 (BST)

Introduction

• sirvival → survival
• allround → all-round

History

• Hiati → Haiti
• pufferfish - puffer fish
• dissasociative - dissociative
• coverup - cover-up
• mainstram - mainstream
• Chriistianity - Christianity

Physiology

First paragraph

• antivirus - maybe counter-virus?
• quarentine - quarantine
• permenant - permanent

Second paragraph

• catatrophically - catastrophically
• antivirus - as above
• specilaised - specialised

Third paragraph

• physioologically - physiologically
• wuickly - quickly

Psychology

First paragraph

• thier - their

Third paragraph

• whos - whose
• acheiving - achieving
• ther - their

Fourth paragraph

• enamored - enamoured
• volentarily - voluntarily
• recieve - recieve

Guns & Ammo

• anymore - any more (It's two words, damn it!)

Syringes

• ap - AP (Consistent style!)
• wellbeing - well-being

Flak Jacket

• Pkers - PKers (Style!)

Your name

• Similiarly - Similarly

Your description

• camoflage - camouflage
• pker, pkers - PKer, PKers (Style!)

Dont be a douchebag

• wiki's - wikis or Wikis

in game (Actually ... occasion).

should be

in game. (Actually ... occasion.)

The text inside the brackets consists of a complete sentence, which the punctuation should reinforce.

Dont be an idiot

• seperating - separating

Dont cause drama

• overbarricades - over-barricades

Humans are not your friends

• Pkers - PKers (Style.)
• trenchzombie - trench-zombie

If zombies should break in before you wake...

• altrusitic - altruistic

Clearing the Streets

First paragraph

• mallrat - Mallrat (Style.)
• construction - Construction (Style: Skill name.)
• ap - AP (Style.)

Second Paragraph

• seige - siege

"The MOB is coming! Stand and Fight!"

Second paragraph

• facefirst - face first or face-first (Style.)
• breakins - break-ins (Style.)

Pro's

→ Pros

• bandolier - bandoleer (Commonwealth spelling.)

Cons

• bodybuilding - Body Building (Style: Skill name.)

Malls

• seiges - sieges
• anymore - any more (It' still two words, damn it!)

Geography

• unlocatable - un-locatable
• sectyion - section

Free running corridors

• typiocally - typically
• Pkers - PKers (Style.)

Ruin as a guide

• guage - gauge

Guerilla Warfare

→Guerrilla Warfare

Third Paragraph

• seperate - separate

Close the gaps

• distarcting - distracting

Restock somewhere else

• ap - AP (Style.)

Communicate

• guerilla - guerrilla

Retake, not defend

• resecure - re-secure

So, zombies are chewing on the door

If you want to link to my Construction Percentages data, I certainly wouldn't object. ;)

Skills

• Shotgun training - Shotgun Training (Style: Skill name.)
• Bodybuilding - Body Building (Style: Skill name.)

Why Firearms (And not Axe)

Dmg, Dmage - damage

Other useful Skills

Second paragraph

• Lurching gait - Lurching Gait (Style: Skill name.)
• Pker - PKer (Style.)

Why Zombie attack skills?

• Necrotech - NecroTech (Style: Company name.)

Tools of the Trade

First paragraph

• Pkers - PKers (Style.)

Second paragraph

• explanitory - explanatory

Budget your AP

• half fone - half done

Picking your victim

• necrotechs - NecroTechs (Style: Company name.)

Killing your victim

First paragraph

• teh person - the person

Third paragrah

• somone - someone

Take it easy

• Deptartments - Departments

Escaping the law

Second paragraph

• Pking - PKing (Style.)

Join a Group

• Pker - PKer (Style.)

Credits

• guerilla - guerrilla