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:For reals? I'd asked and was told that nothing was held for more than 24 hours at a time. If that bit's wrong then I'll take it out. {{User:Misanthropy/Sig}} 16:42, 14 October 2010 (BST) | :For reals? I'd asked and was told that nothing was held for more than 24 hours at a time. If that bit's wrong then I'll take it out. {{User:Misanthropy/Sig}} 16:42, 14 October 2010 (BST) | ||
::who told you that? Factories, hospitals were up for days at a time. Thats why the constables were able to attack them with strikes most evenings. --{{User:Rosslessness/Sig}} 16:43, 14 October 2010 (BST) | ::who told you that? Factories, hospitals were up for days at a time. Thats why the constables were able to attack them with strikes most evenings. --{{User:Rosslessness/Sig}} 16:43, 14 October 2010 (BST) | ||
:::Oh. I'll get to fixing that then. {{User:Misanthropy/Sig}} 16:44, 14 October 2010 (BST) |
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Tidal Tactics
Cast an eye over it, peoples? Mostly looking for more examples to give and perhaps some better layout-ing. 16:00, 14 October 2010 (BST)
- Firstly, I think you mean fail, not fall in the opening paragraph. Secondly River tactics is not based off hyper organised large scale movements. I can, and have done it on my own. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:08, 14 October 2010 (BST)
- Secondly, you don't always start at point 1, and you've made no mention of darks. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:10, 14 October 2010 (BST)
- Zombie river? Regular river is just a tactic of avoidance, but zombie river is based on the inevitable victory of a massed horde. And no, I meant fall. 16:12, 14 October 2010 (BST)
- Your opening paragraph cites river tactics, not zombie river. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:14, 14 October 2010 (BST)
- Thirdly, Id say blackmore fell as much to do with Beachhead Tactics as to zombie river tactics. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:13, 14 October 2010 (BST)
- Your opening paragraph cites river tactics, not zombie river. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:14, 14 October 2010 (BST)
- Zombie river? Regular river is just a tactic of avoidance, but zombie river is based on the inevitable victory of a massed horde. And no, I meant fall. 16:12, 14 October 2010 (BST)
- Secondly, you don't always start at point 1, and you've made no mention of darks. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:10, 14 October 2010 (BST)
Man, I hate to say it but you should probably dumb it down. Don't assume that everyone that could benefit from the guide reads at a college level. Don't get me wrong I thought it was well written, just probably too well written to retain the attention of everyone. --~ 16:33, 14 October 2010 (BST)
"due to successful beachheads, it was the attrition of the constant Tidal Tactics that prevented the survivor foothold from spreading to other buildings. " Virtually every building in Ridley was reclaimed, and several of the trp's had 20+ survivors in them when blackmore fell. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:41, 14 October 2010 (BST)