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I skimmed through this when you made it yesterday, and it looked really good then. If facts need qualifying (a la Ross' comments) sort that out, but it's looking pretty good from what I can see.--{{User:Yonnua Koponen/signature‎}} 16:46, 14 October 2010 (BST)
I skimmed through this when you made it yesterday, and it looked really good then. If facts need qualifying (a la Ross' comments) sort that out, but it's looking pretty good from what I can see.--{{User:Yonnua Koponen/signature‎}} 16:46, 14 October 2010 (BST)
[[Talk:Guides:Ghost_Town_Reclamation]] Iscariot's insights into how to make a guide American friendly. Well worth a read. --{{User:Rosslessness/Sig}} 16:49, 14 October 2010 (BST)

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Tidal Tactics

Cast an eye over it, peoples? Mostly looking for more examples to give and perhaps some better layout-ing. For hate's sake I spit my last breath at thee 16:00, 14 October 2010 (BST)

Firstly, I think you mean fail, not fall in the opening paragraph. Secondly River tactics is not based off hyper organised large scale movements. I can, and have done it on my own. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:08, 14 October 2010 (BST)
Secondly, you don't always start at point 1, and you've made no mention of darks. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:10, 14 October 2010 (BST)
Zombie river? Regular river is just a tactic of avoidance, but zombie river is based on the inevitable victory of a massed horde. And no, I meant fall. For hate's sake I spit my last breath at thee 16:12, 14 October 2010 (BST)
Your opening paragraph cites river tactics, not zombie river. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:14, 14 October 2010 (BST)
Thirdly, Id say blackmore fell as much to do with Beachhead Tactics as to zombie river tactics. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:13, 14 October 2010 (BST)
See those to me are interlinked, the former an important factor in the success of the latter. For hate's sake I spit my last breath at thee 16:14, 14 October 2010 (BST)
Indeed, I'd mention them both. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:15, 14 October 2010 (BST)

Man, I hate to say it but you should probably dumb it down. Don't assume that everyone that could benefit from the guide reads at a college level. Don't get me wrong I thought it was well written, just probably too well written to retain the attention of everyone. --~Vsig.png 16:33, 14 October 2010 (BST)

"due to successful beachheads, it was the attrition of the constant Tidal Tactics that prevented the survivor foothold from spreading to other buildings. " Virtually every building in Ridley was reclaimed, and several of the trp's had 20+ survivors in them when blackmore fell. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:41, 14 October 2010 (BST)

For reals? I'd asked and was told that nothing was held for more than 24 hours at a time. If that bit's wrong then I'll take it out. For hate's sake I spit my last breath at thee 16:42, 14 October 2010 (BST)
who told you that? Factories, hospitals were up for days at a time. Thats why the constables were able to attack them with strikes most evenings. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:43, 14 October 2010 (BST)
Oh. I'll get to fixing that then. For hate's sake I spit my last breath at thee 16:44, 14 October 2010 (BST)
Yeah, when the constables took time to focus on a TRP, it fell rather quickly. Otherwise, it was just your standard feral-smash-cade act. ~ Red Hawk One Talk | space for lease 16:46, 14 October 2010 (BST)

Oh, and SFHNAS weren't really trendsetters. Give some respect to Rowcliffe Must Fall --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:44, 14 October 2010 (BST)

I skimmed through this when you made it yesterday, and it looked really good then. If facts need qualifying (a la Ross' comments) sort that out, but it's looking pretty good from what I can see.--Yonnua Koponen Talk ! Contribs 16:46, 14 October 2010 (BST)

Talk:Guides:Ghost_Town_Reclamation Iscariot's insights into how to make a guide American friendly. Well worth a read. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 16:49, 14 October 2010 (BST)