Talk:Journal:Emily Briar

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OOC: Looking good Emily. Can see you're going to be the 'creative' Demon *smiles* --Kiablade 18:10, 14 June 2007 (BST)
OOC: Huzzah for cameo appearances! :D --Kiablade 20:35, 19 June 2007 (BST)
OOC: More! More! --Ezekiel Seraphin 01:37, 8 October 2007 (BST) OOC: Many Much More! --Kiablade ^{the Demons| GD Forums} 02:18, 8 October 2007 (BST)
OOC: Perhaps you want to add the few lines that Karen Weber wrote when she was talking to Gary. Would certainly add to the "mystery" of the journal. Gary McBane 11:34, 1 February 2008 (UTC)

Typo's/Spelling mistakes

Couple of spelling mistakes in the last one. You had: "Carrier is slowly healing, experencing some side effects from the cyclophosphamide. I've stopped administering both immunosuppressants because ARC204 count has reached stable levels. Enclosed along with this report are (2) Arcana rich blod samples. The Carrier's blood type is AB(-), no signs of any other infectious disease. Carrier is exhibiting signs of fatigue and slight feaver."

"(2) Arcana rich blood samples.", and "exhibiting signs of fatigue and slight fever."

Also, you've put "teh" instead of "the" in the next paragraph :) --Kiablade ^{the Demons| GD Forums} 14:18, 5 July 2007 (BST)

Read the bottom? She was in character. Mark is supposed to fix those =P ~'~,Emily Briar`~,_♥^, 21:59, 5 July 2007 (BST)

Ah, just making sure they weren't accidents :D --Kiablade ^{the Demons| GD Forums} 23:06, 5 July 2007 (BST)