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: Looks like a lot of people complained about the side bar,especially numbers and kills, the conclusions section, some of the judgmental wording in the main article, and the scope of the battle (Giddings / Morrish vs a battle for the entire suburb). Also, "horde" is apparently a loaded term. Whatever that means. -[[User:MHSstaff|MHSstaff]] 03:39, 8 October 2010 (BST) | : Looks like a lot of people complained about the side bar,especially numbers and kills, the conclusions section, some of the judgmental wording in the main article, and the scope of the battle (Giddings / Morrish vs a battle for the entire suburb). Also, "horde" is apparently a loaded term. Whatever that means. -[[User:MHSstaff|MHSstaff]] 03:39, 8 October 2010 (BST) | ||
:Basically everything ''above'' the "The Siege of the Morrish building" header was my re-worded account of the original article. Everything below that needs to be re-written and generally cut down IMO. -- {{User:DanceDanceRevolution/l}} 03:45, 8 October 2010 (BST) | :Basically everything ''above'' the "The Siege of the Morrish building" header was my re-worded account of the original article. Everything below that needs to be re-written and generally cut down IMO. -- {{User:DanceDanceRevolution/l}} 03:45, 8 October 2010 (BST) | ||
::Heh. Whoops. Sorry DDR. Got it. -[[User:MHSstaff|MHSstaff]] | |||
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Revision as of 02:47, 8 October 2010
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Tell me when you've finished
and I'll add stuff. --RosslessnessWant a Location Image? 15:43, 17 September 2010 (BST)
- This occurred during my "sabbatical" from UD so I can't really help with content, but I could probably help edit stuff if you want DDR. -MHSstaff 00:00, 22 September 2010 (BST)
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I started editing and then I realized I had no idea what you were thinking should be changed or needs improvement, so I stopped around the Siege of Morrish; feel free to revert/kill/dump/cade what you feel doesn't make sense. What do you think are the biggest problems with the original article, and what areas need the most improvement? -MHSstaff 03:03, 8 October 2010 (BST)
- Looks like a lot of people complained about the side bar,especially numbers and kills, the conclusions section, some of the judgmental wording in the main article, and the scope of the battle (Giddings / Morrish vs a battle for the entire suburb). Also, "horde" is apparently a loaded term. Whatever that means. -MHSstaff 03:39, 8 October 2010 (BST)
- Basically everything above the "The Siege of the Morrish building" header was my re-worded account of the original article. Everything below that needs to be re-written and generally cut down IMO. -- LEMON #1 03:45, 8 October 2010 (BST)
- Heh. Whoops. Sorry DDR. Got it. -MHSstaff
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Yes this is an awful awful pun. However I figure we're very light on images nabbed from the giallo zombie movies we Europeans cut our teeth on, in favour of Romero's hits and misses, and the modern proto-trenchie genre. Moar goar I say. 
03:37, 8 October 2010 (BST)
