User talk:DanceDanceRevolution/sandpit/8

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Tell me when you've finished

and I'll add stuff. --Rosslessness^{Want a Location Image?} 15:43, 17 September 2010 (BST)

This occurred during my "sabbatical" from UD so I can't really help with content, but I could probably help edit stuff if you want DDR. -MHSstaff 00:00, 22 September 2010 (BST)

Absolutely. Knock yourself out, this is gonna be a pretty sporadic project because rewriting masses of information burns me out pretty quick. -- LEMON #1 07:18, 22 September 2010 (BST)

So...

I started editing and then I realized I had no idea what you were thinking should be changed or needs improvement, so I stopped around the Siege of Morrish; feel free to revert/kill/dump/cade what you feel doesn't make sense. What do you think are the biggest problems with the original article, and what areas need the most improvement? -MHSstaff 03:03, 8 October 2010 (BST)

Looks like a lot of people complained about the side bar,especially numbers and kills, the conclusions section, some of the judgmental wording in the main article, and the scope of the battle (Giddings / Morrish vs a battle for the entire suburb). Also, "horde" is apparently a loaded term. Whatever that means. -MHSstaff 03:39, 8 October 2010 (BST)

Basically everything above the "The Siege of the Morrish building" header was my re-worded account of the original article. Everything below that needs to be re-written and generally cut down IMO. -- LEMON #1 03:45, 8 October 2010 (BST)

Heh. Whoops. Sorry DDR. Got it. -MHSstaff03:47, 8 October 2010 (BST)

How much do you want to cut it by? -MHSstaff 03:48, 8 October 2010 (BST)

Well, the issue isn't cutting it down to a certain length, it's just cutting out all the POV and unnecessary shit that was written in. I guess the mentality we have should be "keep it in if it's important or is worth the effort to re-word it into the article". We don't have to make a masterpiece, but I'd really like to give it the best chance to make Historical Events finally. Just do what you think is good mate. -- LEMON #1 03:52, 8 October 2010 (BST)

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The new updates forced survivors to keep a close eye on barricades.

Yes this is an awful awful pun. However I figure we're very light on images nabbed from the giallo zombie movies we Europeans cut our teeth on, in favour of Romero's hits and misses, and the modern proto-trenchie genre. Moar goar I say. 03:37, 8 October 2010 (BST)